The vocals made me cringe. The techno track was uninspired and dull. The song needs a lot of work before I'll even consider downloading it.
The vocals made me cringe. The techno track was uninspired and dull. The song needs a lot of work before I'll even consider downloading it.
6 people have downloeded it already so im a proe
Sounds a bit like something out of Demon's Crest. Gotta give props for it cuz this does sound very much like a Nightmare City.
I'm glad you think so!
The heavy thrash doesn't mesh very well with the original sample. I would suggest going a different route with "Flashdance", and making a seperate track altogether with the thrashing. It's good thrash and it would be better on its own.
I had thought that while I was making the track. I had hoped the clash would blend in a chaotic way. A beautiful track being stabbed to death with electro thrash. But your suggestion is worth a try. I'll see if "Flashdance" will be better going the French House route and keep this track "Flashdance" free. Thanks for the suggestion.
Solid Effort
Stylisticly, this could qualify for game ending music in and of itself.
That is, if it was "Super Mario and the Gangsta's 'shroom Zone" with badass mario walking off into the sunset.
Solid effort here. I can tell you put a lot into it.
Yea it did take me along time to make this one but i can imagine an ending like that with this music lol thanks!
Excellent job.
Sounds like you were going for a techno-creepy-WTF-is-the-place-kind-o f-feel; and you did it.
Not so sure what the point of the one minute intro was. That portion needs to be developed a wee bit more. Maybe add some anvil strikes to balance out the tech-bass line. It's a bit bottom heavy. Kinda wears on the ears after a few minutes. I can tell you put a lot into it. A little less bottom heavy and it'll be 10/10.
yeah this is pretty old, and I kinda don't like this song (my version) anymore. But yeah I advanced a lot since this and you can check out newer songs by me that are a lot better here http://johngotti0831.bandcamp.com/
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